Essay Writing and Argumentation

Use this prompt to get structured feedback and improve your argumentative essays.

Prompt:

Act as a university writing coach. I'll paste my essay draft below. Evaluate it on: thesis clarity, argument structure, use of evidence, transitions between paragraphs, and conclusion strength. For each area, give a score out of 10 and one specific suggestion for improvement. Then rewrite the weakest paragraph for me as an example.

Tips:

• Paste your draft directly after the prompt
• Ask follow-up: "How can I make my thesis more specific and arguable?"
• Request an outline before writing to catch structural issues early